This section is an opinion section where I tell you what I think is wrong
with your role-playing. I'm not telling exactly what to put down but some guidance
to how to improve.
Wrestler |
Comment |
| Adam Kyle |
No negative comments |
| Axl |
No negative comments |
| Bill Parker |
Maybe use a higher chronology of words and a better format.
Only do interviews so much. |
| BoNeY |
With a skitz it's more likely that one doesn't know about the
happenings of the other. Maybe instead of having battles with each other it could be
more internal |
| cisco Kid |
No negative comments |
| Criminal |
No Negative Comments |
| Crush |
More expansion on your motives and how you'll partake them |
| El Cu Cuy |
Yet to RP |
| El Nijo Del Doragon |
No Negative Comment |
| Esse Cruz |
Needs to expand on replies to interviewers. |
| "The Hawk" Adam Palumbo |
Less emphasis on making fun of names required |
| "The Icon" Adam Kyle |
No Negative Comment |
| "The Idol" Chris Cage |
All-round good but too many grammar errors |
| Italian Stalion |
Maybe when doing interviews the answers should be more
expanded. |
| Jack Blaze |
No Negative Comment |
| Jose Angel |
Better grammar, more content should be added to interviews,
maybe more expansion on answers. |
| Kamelion |
No Negative Comment |
| Myke |
Nice format, but more "Myke announces" stuck in, it
looks like you're changing from one tense to another. |
| Mystery Man Chris Michaels |
Yet to RP |
| MP3 |
No Negative comment |
| Oil |
Massive expansions needed on responses and descriptions |
| One Time |
No negative comment |
| Patrick Weber |
No Negative Comment |
| Psycho |
Should focus on angles and not matches, one thing is to not
announce matches in role-plays, they're booked in advance |
| Ryzon |
Expand on reasoning and emotions |
| Sakutaro Nukashi |
Few spelling errors, nothing else wrong. |
